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Oh dear kelzie, you let my dirty little secret out. I am amazed that some people dont realize that about me ever since the train wreck forum...I thought that one pretty much outed me for good. No, skil, its not something I advertise because I dont think sexuality goes on your sleeve no more appropriately than your heart does. I would think that having either exposed makes life a bit messy and overly vulnerable.
I dont think I would use the word juicey even with a guy I was trying to sweet talk...too much overt suggestion in that word...juicy...even just how it sounds...juicy.
Thats good...for an amateur. Let me show you how its done. :twisted:
The time I've spent in viewing
And actively pursuing
The light that lies
In Kelzie's eyes
Has been my heart's undoing.
And love I'm always hunting
But other's now I' shunning
Her lips so sweet
That now my feet
Toward her are always running
For we first met in passing
But the impression...everlasting
My heart inflamed
Shall not be tamed
So now the die I'm casting!
Venus, lovely Muse
With aim strong and true
Swift and sure
Sent Cupid's lure
To pierce my heart right through!
Its all in the emotion and the thought...you cant just whip a verse off your head and call it poetry...that is called rap.
Oh dear kelzie, you let my dirty little secret out. I am amazed that some people dont realize that about me ever since the train wreck forum...I thought that one pretty much outed me for good. No, skil, its not something I advertise because I dont think sexuality goes on your sleeve no more appropriately than your heart does. I would think that having either exposed makes life a bit messy and overly vulnerable.
SKILMATIC said:And the 60's was the liberal awakening. I thought you could appreciate those times? However, I know what ya mean. Hey, I can sweet talk a lady too.
IMO I like strawberries better casue they are more juicy.
I dont think I would use the word juicey even with a guy I was trying to sweet talk...too much overt suggestion in that word...juicy...even just how it sounds...juicy.
And all the while
You thought I couldnt make you smile
Even though shes a liberal
I can still be considerable
When a man can learn to compromise
He can easily expect to fanticize
When I think of love
I think of my dove
Where has kelzie been all my life
She has no idea Id like to make her my wife
Just something I whipped up off the top of my head.
Thats good...for an amateur. Let me show you how its done. :twisted:
The time I've spent in viewing
And actively pursuing
The light that lies
In Kelzie's eyes
Has been my heart's undoing.
And love I'm always hunting
But other's now I' shunning
Her lips so sweet
That now my feet
Toward her are always running
For we first met in passing
But the impression...everlasting
My heart inflamed
Shall not be tamed
So now the die I'm casting!
Venus, lovely Muse
With aim strong and true
Swift and sure
Sent Cupid's lure
To pierce my heart right through!
Its all in the emotion and the thought...you cant just whip a verse off your head and call it poetry...that is called rap.
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