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My First Political Poem! "Key to the Cosmos"

Crymson89

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Key to the Cosmos

My Microcosm isn’t better than your Microcosm.
Should we not be concerned with the Macrocosm we share?
Victory doesn’t lie in an enemies defeat.
Victory lies as the spoils of war beneath your feet.

To install puppets is to show you don’t want that land,
You’re above it, and so they will disdain you.
To hold territories without transformation into states,
Is to truly deprive a people of a nation. Representation. Colonization.

Why? Why didn’t America Conquer like Rome?
55 States, including Philippines and Cuba.
Because we’re as Xenophobic as the last Tyrant we rebelled against,
Blood has not been shed to cleanse our Republic, the Tree of Liberty died slowly.

Welcome to New America, not like Old America,
Your future is slowly dwindling, and your children will be worse off.
Tyrants rule with Tyrants, the traitor lurks within,
Wealth and Greed in National terms will bring the People’s end.

Humanity’s gift and curse is our ability to Learn,
Therefore is it any wonder that Wealth is what we Yearn?
To choose Capitalism over Democracy is a fool’s poison,
Spread to us by anti-Socialist Propaganda – ‘there’s only one option’

Voting is our only voice in Government,
Yet our voice has gone hoarse,
Our cries for change and revolution,
Are silent.

You see, Politics is like the Free Market,
You let the ‘Business’ know what you want when you buy their product.
So why do we keep buying Sporks and Spam?
Take time to do your shopping, and never forget to feed your Nation.

-By Me.

So I totally realize I'm going to get critiqued both on the politics within and my lack of Poetic ability :mrgreen: 'sok though, it was a fun little write. Note: Most of my poetry actually rhymes I'm experimenting with stuff I guess.
 
FUN THREAD!



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:music: freestyle :music:

Kant was out of order but he got this right
Democracies don't like to fight
they're fickle it's a pickle and a tough nut to crack
the 'Free World' aint' got it's own back.

so many think you've lost if you aint number one
but foriegn relations isn't zero sum.
you shoulda learned that jack, back in iraq
when the sons of iraq laid the smack attack

and now tunisia, libya, egypt et al
are dancin in the ruins of a berlin wall
the iraqi hour was an image of power
now the image is a-flame burnin down the tower

leverage, son, that's what it's about
the West is Best when it helps the flame out
old and cold, our ashes rise higher
coals burn higher with new wood on the fire

:music: can you dig it? :music:
 
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what, no one?
 
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