alphieb
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Or non-antagonizing and non-flaming...:shrug:alphamale said:Notice: Only politically correct poems are allowed here.
Aww... This is good. I wouldn't change a thing... Trust me that is where you get into difficulty/writer block. I especially like poems about the ocean/shore as I am a surfer and there it is my one true refuge.@_girL........ said:The Sea Beside Me
The sultry air filled...
somewhere glowing, stilled
My eyes wondered across your face
and noticed your eyes, blue-green, from the chase
Lately, youv'e been following me
Closely, yet from the distance, me.
Why... I do not know
You will never show
Some would approach
Others would poach
but you, different..
the air insufficient
My breath, salty, your essence
the wind on my face, your presence.
It is you, I've seeked
It's you I know...
The sea, my sweet beautiful, sea...
Needs a little work but :shrug:
Wow... Fantastic! Originally inspired? I have always held a great appreciation for poetry in depth, as I believe it truly mirrors the author's soul, as well as all of whom are able to find co-relative truths therein.jallman said:I posted this in another thread along time ago...but for me its worth posting again:
Upon the Death of the Loved One
There is no taste sweeter than that of the fruit forbidden
Condemned by God, yet still God-given.
And what of the gentle call of sin
Mellow sweet and sovereign?
Oh to revel in the night
Where wings of fantasy take flight
To ever turn my eyes away
From the vulgar light of day!
To live inside these dreams of mine
And take no note of date or time
Wrapped in soothing velvet dark
You and I would never part...
But you are gone and I am here
And I see the dawn is drawing near.
Your touch to me is nocturnal
Until my slumber is eternal.
I walk with longing through my day
And wish that I could go away
Into the abyss where you now dwell
And make a Heaven of your Hell.
Apostle13 said:Wow... Fantastic! Originally inspired? I have always held a great appreciation for poetry in depth, as I believe it truly mirrors the author's soul, as well as all of whom are able to find co-relative truths therein.
Okay... I think I got it... Makes a good song on the guitar. Still gotta create a chorus line..?Apostle13 said:This is my most recent draft, yet unfinished/titled.
cnredd said:Or non-antagonizing and non-flaming...:shrug:
I like bunnies...alphamale said:Just NICE stuff. Ever noticed how all the world's great literature is NICE stuff? Stepford wives stuff - flowers, bunnies, sunhine ...:smile: Have a nice day!
Ivan The Terrible said:I got one....
Coffee Break
We sat at the table-
In the heart of the city;
(American Venice)
Both I and she,
Flow by earth tone,
Casually,
Stir and sip hot tea.
We sat at the table-
In the heart of the city;
(Near the sea)
Both I and she.
Her eyes just glance,
Casually,
Her smile sweet
(I taste it on her lips)
Stir and sip hot tea.
We sat at the table-
In the heart of the city;
(Downtown New River Bend)
For a moment I felt,
For a moment I knew,
That love had held us two.
My eyes, they taste your lips,
My ears, they feel your longing.
American Venice,
The heart of the city,
Our eyes they met and knew-
We sat at the table,
We had a cup,
Stir and sip hot coffee.
Apostle13 said:Aww... This is good. I wouldn't change a thing... Trust me that is where you get into difficulty/writer block. I especially like poems about the ocean/shore as I am a surfer and there it is my one true refuge.
:clap: Yea... Thats a nice one Tecoyah... Maybe you could write my lyrics..?GySgt said:You people write good poems.
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